Dear Author,Who is he cooking for And why is he only making French fries Photo Description A beautiful man stands in front of a stove stirring French fries in a pan, trying to impress the man of his dreams with his cooking skills Dressed only in boxers and an apron, he s hoping dinner won t be the only thing his man finds impressive.This story was written as a part of tDear Author,Who is he cooking for And why is he only making French fries Photo Description A beautiful man stands in front of a stove stirring French fries in a pan, trying to impress the man of his dreams with his cooking skills Dressed only in boxers and an apron, he s hoping dinner won t be the only thing his man finds impressive.This story was written as a part of the M M Romance Group s Love Has No Boundaries event Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short story.
Sincerely Terryn Dear Author Who is he cooking for And why is he only making French fries Photo Description A beautiful man stands in front of a stove stirring French fries in a pan trying to impress the man of his d
This LHNB picture prompt was a cute fun picture and the story is a sweet little fluffy cupcake read.Terryn is on his own in Hollywood, living on the street after leaving his family and promising future behind, or rather kicked out of his family.He has been watching the cutie cop and his pup every morning, the highlight of his day, well one thing leads to another they meet and really like each other.The tags are right, it s pretty much instant love affection, but that s ok, it s a short feel good [...]
Sweet but yes, a little rushed.
Sweet little insta love typa thing.
Cute little read, fits the picture and prompt perfectly.
Sincerly, Terryn was written for the M M Romance Group s 2013 Love Has No Boundaries picture prompt event It is told through the alternating povs of Terryn and Brian view spoiler Terryn is in his very early twenties and living on the LA streets Kicked out by his father, he moved in with a friend until he was kicked out from there The highlight of his day is sitting in an alley to watch the handsome cop pass by as he walked his dog.Brian noticed Terryn and it tore at him as he watched the young m [...]
Cute and sweet, just like other reviewers have said.I enjoyed how it fit the prompt And I enjoyed that it managed to be so light hearted and sweet in spite of some of its subject matter.It s so short, though, and things happen so quickly, that I m not at all convinced that these two will be able to create a successful relationship.
LHNB Story released 9.8.13Insta love story between a cop and a young man whose parents had kicked him out of school after discovering he was gay Pleasant enough story but just didn t click for me.
I think the only thing I would change on this story would be the ending felted rushed was rushed Sometimes alarms go off in life and there are no snooze buttons.
2.5 starsThe prompt and photo are nicely addressed That we should all be so lucky to have a Brian to the rescue
Chocolate chip cookie good.
Very insta love and sweet Loved macho
So very sweet Perfect story to end my workday.
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3.5 stars this was such a sweet short story and a lovely way to start off my day Definitely an interesting take on the picture and prompt I really enjoyed it, yet another great addition to the LHNB event
The story was only about 7k words long but apparently there still had to be the third act separation Why The only reason I m not giving this a one star is because the story was free.
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Not very likely, not very polished, and the viewpoints go every which way.Still, it was nice little story for the first half After that, well Too fast and not making enough sense.
Sweet story Nice interpretation of the photo and the story letter Thank you Erin Shaw for donating your story, your time and your talent.
Okay, love at first sight didn t work for me in this shorty It wasn t even adorable
Ms Shaw did a great job creating this story the writing flowed smoothly, and the characters tugged at my heartstrings Don t miss this short but sweet and very touching read Recommended
I thought this was very sweet I liked the characters and I think this was a great answer to the photo and written prompt Thanks for a great story
To me this story is finding love where you wouldn t expect it to grow and loving enough to hang on.
Sweet and cute, but so very short I would love to see this fleshed out.